Hey Alfie - okay, so I read your script and my first thoughts are simply this: it is not a script yet because the action etc isn't clarified enough. What I think you should do first - before we get into intellectualising about your story - is create a loose animatic in which you show that you understand the action set-pieces and can get this idea on screen. Yes, I think there are opportunities for layering in a bit more story and yes this structure might not be quite right, but more talk and discussion is just going to slow this process down. Just get this mapped out - make a stab at getting it done - get some sound, get some editing on there, and let's take it from there. I'm going to email you a storyboarded's cheat-sheet to assist you in pushing through this next stage more visually and more cinematically! Start today!
Hey Alfie - okay, so I read your script and my first thoughts are simply this: it is not a script yet because the action etc isn't clarified enough. What I think you should do first - before we get into intellectualising about your story - is create a loose animatic in which you show that you understand the action set-pieces and can get this idea on screen. Yes, I think there are opportunities for layering in a bit more story and yes this structure might not be quite right, but more talk and discussion is just going to slow this process down. Just get this mapped out - make a stab at getting it done - get some sound, get some editing on there, and let's take it from there. I'm going to email you a storyboarded's cheat-sheet to assist you in pushing through this next stage more visually and more cinematically! Start today!
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