I wanted to post these just in case there is anything that I can alter before the hand in on Tuesday.
I think this one works the most out of the three, but any criticism is welcome.
This one I think I need to need to delete some of the plucking sounds towards the end. It seems to get crowded and deviates too much from the image.
This is close but I think I need to tweak this one some more, mainly the crackling sound.
Hey Alfie - so quick feedback:
ReplyDelete#1 - I think you need to undo some of the more obvious looping here - it starts to feel as if we're listening to repeated sounds, as opposed to a sort of evolving soundscape.
#2 I'd suggest that you need to attach some sound signature to those hot red elements of the image - it feels as if we should be able to 'hear' those hot, high points happening at the 'top' of your soundscape. I think there's more opportunity for nuance here.
#3 In common with the above feedback, I think you need to give more thought to the sound signatures as they associate with the different energies implied by the coloured glows - so more distinction/relationship between the 'orange frequency' and the 'blue frequency' - in all of your soundscapes, I'd suggest there's another level of sonic detailing to be layered in to ensure they're rich and immersive.
Thanks Phil, I'll try and change this before tomorrow :)
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