Wednesday, 24 April 2019
@Phil @Alan Premise Animatic three (Work in progress)
This is my animatic so far, I wanted to upload it to get feedback on the beginning. Making sure that I'm conveying information efficiently as well as applying feedback already given to me. The last shot seen in this will be where the two birds then initiate a dogfight. Since the last animatic I have done research into dogfights that will help me in telling the rest of the story. During WW1 a German soldier came up with a list of rules in order to secure victory. I wanted to apply this to my eagle character and make the pigeon more of a rebel or maverick in his methods of fighting.
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After some talks, I was advised to step away from my sketch book and try using a different medium on a bigger scale. I then got... -
Presentation 1 by Alfie Gunter on Scribd
Just dropping by quickly to say I think you need to include something in that first set-up that tells us that the Germans are using eagles to bring down the pigeons...
ReplyDeleteMe again - so, yes, I can follow most of the action here... except I can't read the action/POV in the shot at 52 seconds?
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