After uploading my loose animatic I've had talks with Alan and made changes to my story. One thing that I've struggled with when updating my scripts has been the action. I've either been too vague or there's not enough action overall. As well as, the action there were elements of the story that could be taken out or just weren't beneficial to the story. Overall, I'm very happy with story one, having looked into action scenes more based on Alan's advice I think this one has more action as well as reduces the amount of necessary things such as too many pigeon troops.
Premise Story Ideas by alfie gunter on Scribd
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