I made a start on my Art Of now that I have started rendering. This is going to be my title, but I wanted to also get some opinions before making a final decision.
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After some talks, I was advised to step away from my sketch book and try using a different medium on a bigger scale. I then got... -
Presentation 1 by Alfie Gunter on Scribd
Hi Alfie, I think it is a little difficult to read - if you lighten up the coloured diamond shapes to be more pastel the black would pop more, I would maybe take out some of the spark elements in between the letters :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Graeme, I see what you mean about the colours :)
ReplyDeleteYes, there is a bit too much going on for my old eyes!
ReplyDeleteagreed! First rule of typography, Alfie - it must be readable easily!
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